did a mockup for a poster and made up all the copy. everyone was aware that i made it up, it was just to serve as a placeholder. 2days later i get an e-mail...
john,
we need to change some things on the blah blah blah ad before that goes
out. first, it says nothing about the blah blah blah program. it also
starts out by saying something like "that is the only planet you'll ever be
on". hmmm, I don't know about you but I wouldn't place bets that it isn't
possible for some of these students to be on another planet besides earth
before they die - i think that blah blah blah is about the future and about
possibilities, let's not make that statement about "never".
therefore four points on blah blah blah poster:
1, it looks really cool
2, bail on statement about never getting to another planet
3, insert something about becoming a ZD
4, correct grammar so that it is correct and flows better.
thanks,
**** - chief zoom officer
that's really his title...